Group Pitch And Audience Feedback

'The Missing'

For this task, our group came up of a thriller opening in which we presented in front of our class, and were given back feedback from our opening. Our ideas for this thriller opening came from our mini pitch's in which we all used parts of our own ideas to create our main pitch. Our feedback was positive as a lot of people liked the idea of the opening to start with a girl vlogging herself. Many people gave us ideas to add in to our opening to make it more thriller like, this included the idea to film the the girl vlogging and cutting back to the CCTV scene whilst the girl is talking. some said that the flash backs may confuse people; with the use of transitions throughout the flashbacks, it will make it easier for people to understand that it is flashbacks. Overall, our audience feedback was very helpful.