During Catherine's initial feedback, she stated how she liked the fact that we used the effect to make it look like our character was filming herself with a broken camera. She also said that she liked our CCTV effect. This is good as this was our aim.
She also tells us how she likes the ending of our opening, and how the title appears and everything goes dark. This is good as we wanted to make sure that people noticed our title and that it had an impact on the audience.
She does say however that the credits should fade more rather than coming in straight away.
Also, she noticed that part of the credit text covers our character's face when she's in the shop.
She says that when the production logo company comes up, the music doesn't go with it and doesn't really flow into the BBC music that we used. She suggests that we should either use different music or keep it silent.
She said that our thriller opening did make her ask questions, which is good because this is was the aim of our opening, to try and create suspense and mystery.
After we took on board everything Catherine said and made changes to our thriller opening. We interviewed Catherine again and she said that our opening was a lot better after the changes.
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